Davoo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Andy Levin]

OMG wonderfull

This is THE best of the "first flashes" ! Please, make andy lewin into a series! You could become famous!

[You Love This Movie]

Nice!

Ok, let me get down to the basics here, this is HIGHLY original! I love how long it is too! This so deserved that daily feture!

Plot:

Amazing, I've almost never seen a flash that can go on for almost 20 mins without going dull on me. The idea of opening up with that crappy video was genius. Then asking the viewers to vote 5 was holarrious! (but so correct) But I do think you went a little slow on the "kill characters" scene, they walked around and flipped to the next scene in a much to slow paced way. If you make it faster, it feels more like an actually working montage.

Now I wonder why you decided that illwillpress will be the one you force to make a flash in the movie? Because he's not the best animator in my opinion.

But in all, the plot (aka storyline) was very well done and prepared! Good job!

Animation:

Decent. It wasn't the best i've seen, and I'm sure almost anyone can agree with me that there are WAY better looking flashes out there than this. But it doesn't really turn down the expeiriance TOO much so you're fine. I'm sure that if the graphics were any better, it would create and insane loading time!

Also, the backrounds probably looked better than the characters themselves. Like that theater, all of the seats looked nice and detailed. And then that faggoty kid's room, I liked the way you put up all those posters and all the clutter that fat kid had just left around. And Illwillpress's house looked pretty nice too!

As for the character design, it was okay but once again not the best.

Sound:

Nice, I'm glad you've put effort into voice acting and all, but the music really REALLY sucked. I don't know why I felt it was so terrible, but it annoyed the crap out of me. Seriously, I usually like songs like that, but for some reason I didn't here.

So how many friends helped you two out to make all the voices? If you were able to make them all by yourselves, I salute you!

So yeah, sound is nice.

Conclusion:

You guys are great. So you didn't pull of the best graphics or sounds, but you're funny and have great detirmination.

I was surprised to read that you have been working on it for 9 months. I would almost never spend that much time on ANYTHING. You have true destiny maaaan. ~-^

What a true title! I SOOOO DOOOO love this movie!

I hope you make more flash in the future! So long!

RSQViper responds:

Thanks for the in-depth review, man. Nice to see the 13 and a half minutes didn't wear on you.

As far as the graphical representation, neither boinky or I are great artists, but we sis try to put extra effort into the backgrounds.

As for the music, it's unfortunate you hated it. We actually really liked the choices and for most of it there were actual reasons we used it.

As for the voices, it was just boinky and I doing all of them. We also used illwill because so many people point at his work as very easy to make and the fact he doesn't even draw anymore, he just uses old graphics he drew forever ago.

Thanks for the great review!

[How not to die']

LQTMS!

You're funny. Make a sequel thats MUCH longer please!

[TWEEN: A Flash Odyssey]

You are amazing

I've never seen anything so simple and vibrant like this before! You so deserved that daily feture!

[:: Caffeine Conspiracy ::]

LOL

This is one of the funniest cartoon's you've ever made.

[Dont Mess With The Portal]

ehm...

I dont think this deserves to be blammed or anything. Just figure out how to get the sound to work...and you'd have some pretty decent work.

[Awesome's Creed]

amazing

you imitated egoraptor's style almost perfectly!

[Nob Down]

Not bad

You have potential...it gave me a very slight chuckle...thus fullfilling it's purpose as a flash.

Eragon482 responds:

Yay, thanks

[Billy Mays: BOWFLEX]

Nice! No wait, AWESOME!

Out of all the parodies I've seen, I never would have guessed that someone would make one of Billy Mays. You guys rock. It was kinda like a commercial Blockhead would be watching. (With the way that the voices were almost unhearable.)

[Super Sprite Bloopers]

nice

some of the clips (like the fatass one) were exretmly funny. But it was way too short. But hey, you got (and very well deserved) daily 9th place.