Nice but...
Well, the fact that this was random (and not too carefully planned out) is a good thing and I got a good laugh out of it.
The sound was nice too. But, the objects on the screen were way out of place all the time. You should find a way to put them where they belong, in the center of the screen.
But what bothers me the most is the filesize: 30.2 for two pics and some text? That's way too big. You should try to compress the audio a bit more, thus making the flash smaller in size.
I see what you did there. Copying parts of the review I wrote for one of your flashes. Clever.
And now stop whining.
nice
I dont care what other people say about you, you're pretty good at flash. It just needs a higher frame rate.
U guys are seriously makin my day :D a higher frame rate. I kno, last episode was 12 fps, now I changed it to 20 fps, il probably try 25 fps and if it works then... well il use it, but I dont think it will work. anyways if u kno anyonw interested in writing scripts for PAML then pm me.
Nice!
Ok, let me get down to the basics here, this is HIGHLY original! I love how long it is too! This so deserved that daily feture!
Plot:
Amazing, I've almost never seen a flash that can go on for almost 20 mins without going dull on me. The idea of opening up with that crappy video was genius. Then asking the viewers to vote 5 was holarrious! (but so correct) But I do think you went a little slow on the "kill characters" scene, they walked around and flipped to the next scene in a much to slow paced way. If you make it faster, it feels more like an actually working montage.
Now I wonder why you decided that illwillpress will be the one you force to make a flash in the movie? Because he's not the best animator in my opinion.
But in all, the plot (aka storyline) was very well done and prepared! Good job!
Animation:
Decent. It wasn't the best i've seen, and I'm sure almost anyone can agree with me that there are WAY better looking flashes out there than this. But it doesn't really turn down the expeiriance TOO much so you're fine. I'm sure that if the graphics were any better, it would create and insane loading time!
Also, the backrounds probably looked better than the characters themselves. Like that theater, all of the seats looked nice and detailed. And then that faggoty kid's room, I liked the way you put up all those posters and all the clutter that fat kid had just left around. And Illwillpress's house looked pretty nice too!
As for the character design, it was okay but once again not the best.
Sound:
Nice, I'm glad you've put effort into voice acting and all, but the music really REALLY sucked. I don't know why I felt it was so terrible, but it annoyed the crap out of me. Seriously, I usually like songs like that, but for some reason I didn't here.
So how many friends helped you two out to make all the voices? If you were able to make them all by yourselves, I salute you!
So yeah, sound is nice.
Conclusion:
You guys are great. So you didn't pull of the best graphics or sounds, but you're funny and have great detirmination.
I was surprised to read that you have been working on it for 9 months. I would almost never spend that much time on ANYTHING. You have true destiny maaaan. ~-^
What a true title! I SOOOO DOOOO love this movie!
I hope you make more flash in the future! So long!
Thanks for the in-depth review, man. Nice to see the 13 and a half minutes didn't wear on you.
As far as the graphical representation, neither boinky or I are great artists, but we sis try to put extra effort into the backgrounds.
As for the music, it's unfortunate you hated it. We actually really liked the choices and for most of it there were actual reasons we used it.
As for the voices, it was just boinky and I doing all of them. We also used illwill because so many people point at his work as very easy to make and the fact he doesn't even draw anymore, he just uses old graphics he drew forever ago.
Thanks for the great review!
Not bad
You have potential...it gave me a very slight chuckle...thus fullfilling it's purpose as a flash.
Yay, thanks
LOLOLOLOL!!!!
Im glad that the two of us share...motto's:
"Quality doesn't matter...at all really. It all goes down to just trying to eintertain."
That's what I had in mind when I made a flash called "this" it sucked balls graphic wise, but was funny.
And my gosh, this was crappy looking...but one of the funniest things I've seen all day! Keep it up PLEASE!
Merci, I think?
Yes I believe this is a compliment...
Anytime someone wants you to continue it is quite flattering.
The best thing eva!
How it only got weekly 2nd, I do not know. But regardless it's TOO awesoume...even for television standards!
Well it WAS submitted on the last day of the week. ;D
hm...
I wonder if it really IS cheating though...
anyway, this flash was so funny! Graphics don't really matter in internet humor, and this has no good graphics, but it's still awesoume!
Yeah, it is cheating, lol ;)
Hmmm
This was unfortunatly the ONLY flash you've ever made that isn't toally awesoume. This...is just a little awesoume.
I do however LOVE the grahpics, it's amazing how you can whip up something so beutiful SO fast that we don't even begin to wonder what you're doing.
The voice acting rocked (as usuall) but the whole point is to eintertain, and sorry but walking boobs wasn't funny to me.
I felt like I was done making it before I'd even started. I refused to believe I had finished it after only 3 days of work. That was the idea, of course: get this thing done in a few days. I just had no idea I would actually live up to it.
woot
Best thing I;ve seen all day!
either you havnt watch anything but this cartoon today, or you've watched EVERYTHING EVER AND STILL COME TO THE CONCLUSION THIS CARTOON IS AMAZING.
I go with the latter.
great!
this is turd of the week material! Some lame vids are so funny.....like this one keep it up
I think this is like weekly first material mane
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